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The two most important changes I have made are the organization of the essay and the word choices in some places of the body paragraph. Organization includes the complete change in the thesis statement and in the topic sentences. In the feedback provided by the peers, it has been made evident that I have not mentioned the thesis properly on the conspiracy theory. Hence, I have added the complete thesis statement with the sub-topics.