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Revision Rationale

Revision Rationale

Q Answer the following questions in full sentences. You can write in this document, save it, and upload it to the appropriate drop box when completed. Be sure to provide examples when required. Grading will be based on demonstrated on the quality of revision between the draft and the final as well as your explanations in this document demonstrating your knowledge about why the revisions were necessary for the examples you provide.

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The two most important changes I have made are the organization of the essay and the word choices in some places of the body paragraph. Organization includes the complete change in the thesis statement and in the topic sentences. In the feedback provided by the peers, it has been made evident that I have not mentioned the thesis properly on the conspiracy theory. Hence, I have added the complete thesis statement with the sub-topics.